Friday 20 July 2007

Seeing through


Sometimes I can see through you.
The transparent surface of your mind
lets me enter into your world,
the air becomes light,
it’s easy to breathe.

Sometimes you look right through me.




8 comments:

Mick said...

I like the step you're taking in this direction with collage and manipulation, Susu. The poem is beautiful. :)

SusuPetal said...

Thanks, Mick. Yes, this is something new, this kind of manipulation and I'm rather satisfied with the result.

hpy said...

You can be!

SusuPetal said...

Yes, HPY, it's good to be sometimes satisfied, usually I'm a little bored with my results.

chrome3d said...

I like your blog. You have your own style and I also like the themes you have here, poetry, clouds etc. Keep up the good work!

SusuPetal said...

Thank you, chrome3d. This blog is sometimes a mixed and messed up collage of my feelings, but glad you like it:)

chrome3d said...

Mixed and messed up collage.Well, that sounds exactly like...life! I find it boring if there is only one theme in a blog.

SusuPetal said...

Luckily life isn't a bore:)