Monday 9 June 2008

Dreamer

She’s a beautiful dreamer,
dreaming of her own private world,
in her own secret world,
dreaming her own faraway dreams,
shared by no one.
Beautiful dreamer,
smiling in her dreams,
so softly.
Look at her
and see the dream.

Just look at her
and be for a moment
a part of her world.
Look, but don’t touch,
don’t disturb her.

She doesn’t want to be awaken
from her dreams.

Only look. In silence.
And remember to love.

Look.


20 comments:

Anonymous said...

Lovely piece for The Dreamer!

SusuPetal said...

Dreaming is lovely:)

hpy said...

That's a good way to sen us to your gallery.

SusuPetal said...

Am I clever or not, HPY:)

PeterParis said...

So, I promise only to look!

PeterParis said...

... and now I looked also on your gallery! Really impressed!

SusuPetal said...

Hope you didn't touch, Peter:)

Mick said...

Haunting and beautiful; in fact, dreamlike.

SusuPetal said...

Glad you think so, Mick, dreamlike was the vision I had in mind.

ScaughtFive said...

Nice poem and good pic. I spend most of my days with my hair in my eyes. I sheepdog locks are me security blanket, I do think. Dreams are a hometown. You can go back to visit but you can't live there.

SusuPetal said...

Hair is like a veil, good to hide away from a world not so dreamlike.

Liisa said...

I have no words to add. She really seems to be left alone.

SusuPetal said...

Left alone, or wanting to be alone. Who knows, Liisa.

Trijnie said...

hi Susu, hope your well, you wrote beautiful poems

SusuPetal said...

Thanks, Trijnie, I'm well, nice to hear from you.

chrome3d said...

You are a very clever dreamer.

ScaughtFive said...

I like the dandelion picture. When you squint your eyes at lights they look like dandelions.

SusuPetal said...

A make believer, chrome3d.

Scaughtfive, that's true, you see stars and diamonds.

Anonymous said...

Just look, don't touch -- that's something we should note & respect about young people. Especially dirty old men should learn this lesson well ;)

SusuPetal said...

Dirty old men and nousy old women, too:)