They had been waiting for hours, waiting for the rain to stop. The hotel room felt damp and miserable, outside it was no better. The unpaved streets of the little town had turned into a swamp of mud, big puddles speckled the empty street corners.
The need to make the other understand had lost its meaning. The desperate urge to justify the decisions they had been making, seemed now pathetic and ludicrous.
They just wanted the rain to stop. They fantasized about leaving the hotel room, stepping outside, going separate ways, never looking back.
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The weekly theme for Thursday Challenge is bright
13 comments:
Nice catch, you can see the sunbeams thats fighting to show themselves!
And the sunbeams won the fight, finally, Zoey!
I like your story, and the photo too.
I love ur bright sky...
My Thursday Challenge post in here and here
Thanks, HPY.
Bright sky after clouds is good, picturing of life.
A sad story, Susu ... but, a beautiful photograph.
Mutual understanding though, Mick, maybe not so sad...?
"To have what you wanted
to be free but haunted
always running the gauntlet
in the dead of the night."
funny how a vacation can turn out to be the end of the whole deal. A familiar story.
People seem to believe that you can travel away from yourself and your problems, that a change of scenery makes everything ok, that moving to a new house starts a new life.
People are so ready to believe.
"people are so ready to believe"
That's one of the things that makes me hide from them.
Hmm, they don't stop existing though...
Once again a sad, but beatifully told, story!
You should perhaps try a happy story now; your favourite season is here!
Peter, I just can't write happy stories, I'm handicapped that way.
But, occasionally I post happy photos, don't I!!!!
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