Monday, 12 October 2009

Snowflakes




First snow,

it came with the cold north wind.

Grey clouds melted into water,

water became snowflakes.

Earth is still black.

Snowflakes vanished to the drains.


Puddles full of yellow leaves,

boats sailing to the south.




11 comments:

lepis said...

We didn't get any!!! Hah hah haa!!!

SusuPetal said...

YOU WILL, Lepis!

layers said...

I am assuming you wrote this -- beautiful words about my snow which I have mixed feelings about-- don't like to drive or walk in it but is sure is pretty to look at.

SusuPetal said...

Yes, Layers, I wrote that poem. I don't have a mixed feeling about snow -I hate it! I don't like when it's cold!

jinksy said...

Loved your poetic description, SusuPetal; it painted a beautiful picture.

hpy said...

I wouldn't mind some snow flakes, but just some, and just because it's not probable that we'll get any right now. The weather isn't even chilly yet.

SusuPetal said...

Thank you, Jinksy!

I could send you some, HPY, but luckily all of it melted already! It's still chilly.

Mick said...

A very positive attitude thus far, Susu. At least as far as that gorgeous photograph and the poem are concerned. :)

SusuPetal said...

Lies....words and photos, Mick. I hate winter!!!

hpy said...

Vi har frost idag. Forsta gangen!

SusuPetal said...

Frost! Inte roligt, HPY. Här var det -2 grader pä morgonen.