Thursday, 12 March 2009

Broken





I know how it feels
to be broken.
Looking at the pieces of myself.
Trying to save all those fragments of my mind,
Losing  bits of sanity.

So many times,
so many times before.
And now, once again.
As I swore that never, never again.

Here I am, once more.

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The weekly theme for Thursday Challenge is broken

21 comments:

hpy said...

After all the adventures I lived last night (in my dreams) I felt quite vroken this morning, but still I love dreaming, and I think that I start dreaming more again. Of course this has nothing to do with your photo and poetry, but that's what you made me think. So it does have something to do with what you do. (Miten jonkinlainen painajainen voi olla helpottava?)

SusuPetal said...

Vaikea nähdä, että painajaiset olisivat helpottavia, HPY.

jl said...

I wish you didn't know.

SusuPetal said...

I'd wish that too, jl, but there are situations one can't escape.

Azer Mantessa said...

am a bit confuse or maybe i have missed something somewhere

the poem sounds a bit feminine so now am not sure are you male or female

*scratch head*

nice poem still :-)

SusuPetal said...

Well, does it matter, Azer? Texts are important, not the gender.

Krisu said...

Hyvin työstetty kuva, puhutteleva.

SusuPetal said...

Kiitos, Krisu.

Anonymous said...

Auts! Koskettavan henk koht. Jokseenkin tuttua meille bipopäille. Voimia sulle.

prkl

SusuPetal said...

Kiitos, prkl.

Elegia said...

On asioita, joita ei voi päättää, vaikka järjellä haluaisi. Sanasi voisivat olla omiani, lupaus uudesta aina joka maanantai ja sitten romahdus joskus jo tiistaina, joskus vasta paljon myöhemmin.

Peter said...

I'm sure you can put the pieces together again! (The spring is approaching.. that could help I presume.)

SusuPetal said...

Totta, Elegia, ja on asioita, joihin ei voi vaikuttaa -voi vaikuttaa ainoastaan hieman siihen, miten niihin suhtautuu.

I hope that spring helps a little, Peter, I really do.

jinksy said...

So, you're a jigsaw puzzle?! I'm sure the pieces with fit back to make a perfect picture one day! xxx

SusuPetal said...

Puzzles are so difficult, Jinksy, I hope mine has only five pieces max.

Mick said...

Which broken bit is this, Susu?

SusuPetal said...

Bits of a little bit of everything, Mick.

Lost in the city said...

But you know that it's the way it is, like a pendulum ... so try to jump off that rope when the ends touches the good side ...

SusuPetal said...

I try, Lost in the city.

Azer Mantessa said...

yes ... text matters but the song wriiten for you was ... errmmm ... a bit masculine ... yikes

should have known better

*biting nails*

SusuPetal said...

Oh, stop biting nails, Azer, no harm done!