Sunday, 3 August 2008

Think twice


Do you want me to be your wife, to be loved and worshipped by you, to be cared for, to be wanted and needed by you, to be desired by you?

Do you want me to be your friend; do you want me to listen to you, to comfort you in despair, to drive away the demons of your mind, the shadows of your nights, the phantoms of your days?

Do you want me to be the mother of your children, do you want me to carry the fruit of your semen for months to come and go into labour to make you father?

If you answer you do, remember: it’s a promise, an oath never to be broken, never to be forgotten.

Think twice.




14 comments:

Liisa said...

These days quite many of the young seem to think far more than twice and just go on alone.

SusuPetal said...

That's true, Liisa, and then there are people who won't stop to think anything, they just say " I do" over and over again, because it's so nice to be in love all the time....

Elegia said...

Yes, I thought twice.
And wish I did wise ;)

SusuPetal said...

I bet you did, Elegia.

krystyna said...

What a beautiful pic with rings and and a great idea - Think Twice.
Thank you for sharing!

Always the best for you!

SusuPetal said...

Thanks for you comment, Krystyna.

Mick said...

I'm still thinking ... :|

SusuPetal said...

Take your time, Mick:)

lepis said...

No-oooooo...

No more broken promices for anyone.

SusuPetal said...

That is why it's better to think twice, no...trice...well, many times, Lepis.

hpy said...

I changed just one word (or a little more)

Do I want to be your wife, to be loved and worshipped by you, to be cared for, to be wanted and needed by you, to be desired by you?

Do I want to be your friend; do I want to listen to you, to comfort you in despair, to drive away the demons of your mind, the shadows of your nights, the phantoms of your days?

Do I want to be the mother of your children, do I want to carry the fruit of your semen for months to come and go into labour to make you father?

If I answer I do, I must remember: it’s a promise, an oath never to be broken, never to be forgotten.

Think twice. Dear me.

And I repeat, think twice.

SusuPetal said...

Not bad, HPY, you gave the poem a good, new perspective to think.
Twice.

ScaughtFive said...

It's like being as close as two words that rhyme.

SusuPetal said...

Yes it is.